Örnek cevap 6-7 bandındaki adaylara göre yapılandırılarak yazılmıştır.
Talk about a friend who accomplished something you are proud of
You should say:
who your friend is
what he or she has accomplished
how he or she has succeeded
how you felt after his / her accomplishment
I would like to talk about a friend who runs an Instagram page. My friend, Jane, had been unemployed for months until opening this page. A year ago, she set up an Instagram account for reviewing makeup equipment, because she was bored of being unemployed.
She shares at least one video every day. In these videos, she tries new makeup techniques with different equipment. She tries many different combinations and shows how they look on her. She has followers of all ages.
Her page quickly got many followers. There are now more than 100,000 subscribers. She has become very popular because she has great ideas about how to make up. She also knows which equipment is best. After she got over 10,000 followers, she got sponsorship offers and now she earns really well. She bought a car and a house only in 6 months.
I feel really happy for her. She was too desperate about her life. She believed she would never find a decent job, but she is now an Instagram celebrity. I have never seen her as happy as this before. I wish I was as talented as her.