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#1 Bitcoin ATM sayısı

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Amerika’da ATM sayısının diğer ülkelerden çok daha fazla olduğunu, Kanada harici ülkelerde Bitcoin ATM sayısının iyice azaldığını, Kuzey Amerika ve Avrupa kıtalarının neredeyse tüm ATM’lere sahip olduğunu.

The bar chart compares the number of Bitcoin ATMs in 10 different countries, while the pie chart illustrates their distribution by continent.

The US remains far ahead of the competition at 554 ATMs, slightly more than four times the number in the runner-up, Canada (135). This figure drops much further among the rest. While the UK owns 47 ATMs, almost twice higher than in Spain, no other country is home to more than 20 ATMs. This falls even below 15 in Australia and Japan. It should also be highlighted that the US possesses more or less 50 times more ATMS than Japan, the country with the lowest number of ATMs at 11.

Looking at the continental distribution in detail, we can see that North America contains almost three quarters of all ATMs at 73.23%, remaining significantly ahead of its closest counterpart, Europe (20.42%). In other words, even Europe owns more Bitcoin ATMs than all other continents combined. Whereas less than 5% of all ATMS are present in Asia, it drops to less than 2% in Oceania. Yet, South America and Africa lag far behind at 0.32% and 0.11%, respectively.

Overall, it is clear that the vast majority of Bitcoin ATMs are available for use in the US and Canada, which make up North America.

#2 Japonya intihar verileri

Hangi ayrıntılar dikkat çekiyor?

2009 yılında intihar sayısı zirve yapmış, ama sonraki yıllarda düzenli azalış var. Başlangıç ve bitiş yılları arasında 10,000 civarı fark var. Sağlık problemleri sebebiyle intihar edenlerin sayısı diğerlerinin toplamından fazla. İş ve ilişki sebepli meselelerin etkisi görece düşük.

The bar chart illustrates the changes in the number number of suicides in Japan over a period of 10 years, while the line graph compares the causes of suicide among the Japanese in 2017.

As for the annual figures, we can see that suicides peaked in 2009 at 32,845, slightly lower than in 2008, the very beginning of the 10-year-period. In subsequent years, there was a gradual decline, with the figures declining below 30,000 for the first time in 2012. The drop in 2012 compared to 2011 amounted to almost 3,000, the greatest yearly fall throughout the entire period. In 2015, the total number of suicides remained below 25,000, yet the lowest number was recorded in 2017 at 21,321, much fewer than the peak point, 2009. 

In terms of the major reasons for suicide in 2017, it should be noted that health issues accounted for the vast majority of all reasons at over 10,000, a figure greater than the sum of all others illustrated in the line graph. Economic or existential worries ranked second at 3,464, just above family problems. By contrast, the figure for work-related issues dropped slightly below 2,000, much greater than the one for relationship problems, 768. 

Overall, it is clear that suicides became increasingly less common in Japan, excluding 2009, while health issues were responsible for most of the suicides in Japan within 2017.

#3 Atari oyunları

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Pac-Man, satış sayısı ve gelir açısından diğerlerini geride bırakmış. Space Invaders ve Street Fighter II de başarısız sayılmaz. Asteroids, görece çok satmış ve orantısal olarak az kazanmış.

The bar chart compares the lifetime revenue of most popular Arcade games with the number of cabinets sold for each one.

When we look at the overall income in detail, we can see that Pac-Man has generated a revenue of 3.5 billion dollars, exactly 800 million dollars more than the runner-up, Space Invaders. Street Fighter II ranks just behind Space Invaders at 2.3 billion, remaining significantly ahead of the rest. Of all the others, Ms. Pac-Man has earned the most, generating 1.2 billion dollars, only 100 million dollars greater than NBA Jam. This figure drops to 1 billion dollars for the game called Defender, and even lower for Asteroids and Mortal Combat, 800 million and 600 million dollars, respectively. 

As for the cabinet sales, we can observe that Pac-Man dominates this list, as well. It has sold 400,000 cabinets, only 10% more than its closest counterpart, Space Invaders. Yet, it should be noted that the gap between each in terms of revenue is proportionally much higher compared to the number of cabinets sold. In comparison, Street Fighter II has sold half as many as Pac-Man, corresponding to 200,000. While Asteroids could not generate a substantial amount, it overshadowed Defender, Mortal Kombat and NBA Jam in terms of cabinet sales at 100,000. Finally, Mortal Kombat is the game that has generated the lowest income, but as regards cabinet sales, it has been replaced by NBA Jam.

Overall, it is clear that the game of Pac-Man has outcompeted all others both in revenue and cabinet sales.

#4 Tenis oyuncuları

Hangi ayrıntılar ön plana çıkıyor?

Federer, Wimbledon ve Amerika açık turnuvalarını domine ederken, Nadal Fransa’da ezici üstünlük sağlamış. Djokovic, Avustralya açık turnuvasında Federer’in ilerisinde. Diğer oyuncular pek varlık gösterememiş.

The bar chart compares the number of 4 different Grand Slam titles won by 7 active male tennis players. 

As for the Wimbledon title, Roger Federer ranks first at 8 victories, 3 more than the runner-up, Novak Djokovic. Rafael Nadal and Andy Murray follow far behind at 2 Wimbledon titles, while no other player has been able to win the Wimbledon cup so far. When it comes to the French open, Rafael Nadal clearly dominates the list at 12 victories, winning the overwhelming majority of all French Open titles. Federer, Djokovic and Wawrinka have prevailed only once at French open, remaining far behind Nadal.

Looking at the Australian open in detail, we can see the formidable competition between Federer and Djokovic. While Djokovic has won this tournmanent 7 times so far, Federer remains right behind at 6 titles. Among the rest, nobody but Wawrinka could win a title at Australian open, yet he is far behind Djokovic and Federer at only 1 victory. By contrast, in US open, there is more of a balance between players. Just like in Wimbledon, Roger Federer remains ahead of the competition at 5 titles, only 1 more than his closest counterpart, Nadal. Djokovic ranks third at 3 titles, while each player among the rest secured only 1 title. US open is the only tournament in which each player in the list has won a title. 

Overall, it is clear that Federer, Nadal and Djokovic have won far more Grand Slam singles titles, with Federer being the slightly more successful player.

#5 Covid-19

Nelerden bahsetsek iyi olur?

Süpermarket sektörü haricinde herkes zarar etmiş. Elektronik ürünler ve mücevher satışında kayıp diğerlerinden daha fazla. Barlar, Aralık ayından sonra arada bir artış yaşansa da 2018 yılında göre fazlasıyla zarar etmiş.

The bar chart compares the change in the revenue of shops in Hong Kong from October 2019 to March 2020, while the line graph illustrates the differences in the monthly income of Hong Kong bars between 2018 and 2020.

Looking at the bar chart in detail, we can see that only supermarkets have increased their sales between October 2019 and March 2020, approaching almost 700 million dollars, a rise of nearly 100 million dollars. While the revenue of electronics shops remained over 500 million in October 2019, it fell down to less than 300 million dollars, a dramatic decline experienced by jewellery&gifts shops, as well (from 500 million to slightly over 200 million). Yet, the loss was not as high among the rest. Whereas the decline in revenue remained less than 100 million dollars for small food shops, it surpassed over 100 million for clothing&footwear and medicines&cosmetics shops. 

As for the monthly bar revenue, we can clearly understand that it peaked at the beginning of 2019 at 21.5 million dollars, slightly more than the summer figures of 2018. As of January 2019, the revenue of the bars sharlp declined, falling down to 15 million at the end og January. This figure fluctuated between 15 and 20 million until the end of the year; however, it plunged afterwards. By March 2020, it declined below 10 million dollars, a loss of more or less 11 million dollars compared to March 2019. 

Overall, it is clear that, in Hong Kong, all type of shops but supermarkets underwent a significant revenue loss, while the damage was even greater for bars.

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